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Ez az Angol essay így jó?

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How might the world be different a hundred years from now?
The world is evolving at an ever-increasing rate due to science and modern technology.Consequently, it is very difficult to say what the world will be different a decade from now, and a hundred years is almost completely unpredictable but you can guess
It will probably happen that we will have to leave the Earth. The Earth will become overcrowded that is why we need to look for new construction sites. Such a place could be, for example, the sea where you could live in bubbles or even another planet. The appropriate planet could be either the Moon or the Mars, where we also have to live in bubbles. However, much remains to be done for space exploration to move masses of people to an alien planet.
There’s a chance it might happen that in 100 years we will be travel by flying cars. Already exists cars wich can transosform into a helicopter however only a few of them exist in the world. Companies will soon start manufacturing flying cars within years, but transport will never be able to switch completely to aviation because it is only possible in limited weather conditions.
Personally these 2 ideas were the most interesting for me still the overcrowding has a much higher priority than the flying car, because the last one has only a convenience function

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How might the world change a hundred years from now?

The world is evolving at an ever-increasing rate due to science and modern technology. Consequently, it is very difficult to say what could change a decade from now, let alone a hundred years, it’s almost completely unpredictable but we can only guess.

We will probably have to leave the Earth, it will become overcrowded, therefore we will need to look for new construction sites, these for example could be the sea where we could live in bubbles or even another planet.

The appropriate planet could be either the Moon or Mars, where we also have to live in bubbles. However, much remains to be achieved in space exploration to move masses of people to an another planet.

There’s a chance that in a 100 years time we will be travelling by flying cars. Such flying cars already exist which they can transform into a helicopter, however, only a few of them exist in the world. Companies will soon start manufacturing flying cars within years, but transportation will never be able to switch completely to aviation because it is only possible in limited weather conditions.

Personally for me these 2 ideas were the most interesting for me still the overpopulation has a much higher priority than flying cars, because the latter has only a convenience function.
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