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Van egy feladatom egy kép leírást kellene írni. Írtam eddig 255 szót viszont min. 300-nak kellene lennie. Tudtok ebben segíteni? Egy magyar-angol fordító segítségével írtam.
Itt a story:
The big journey
On a Tuesday afternonn Lucy found a letter in the post from her boyfriend. In the letter, he briefly explained that he was breaking up with him.
She sat in the room and Lucy cried, thinking about what to do next. After a short thought, he realized he had to travel. The next day his mother bought a ticket to Rome. He went to the airport and it rained. He waited sadly at the airport because it was still two hours before takeoff. Arriving in Rome, he was surprised because he could not find his bag, so he went to the hotel without a bag. Arriving at the hotel, he noticed that the hotel was closed, so he fell asleep on the street in the evening. The next morning he was picked up by the hotel receptionist, who helped escort him to his room. Lucy went to bed immediately and just slept until the next morning. He woke up early because one of the bellboy people brought the missing package, which he was very happy about. After receiving his luggage, he lay back to sleep. In the morning he took the metro to the Coliseum because the stop is here. He even looked at the Roman Forum, where he saw old ancient columns. He found many more interesting sights in the city. In one of the museums, a man accompanied Lucy.
The next day they left for the airport together. They could hardly wait to get home and announce the big news.
KÖSZÖNÖM, ELŐRE IS A SEGÍTSÉGET!
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The big journey
On a Tuesday afternoon Lucy found a letter in the post from her boyfriend. In the letter, he briefly explained that he was breaking up with him.
She sat in the room and cried, thinking about what to do next. She was very upset. After a short thought, she realized she had to travel. The next day her mother bought a ticket to her to Rome. She went to the airport. The weather was rainy, and a little bit cold. She waited sadly at the airport because it was still two hours before takeoff. When she arrived in Rome, she was surprised because she could not find her bag, so she went to the hotel without a bag. When she arrived at the hotel, she noticed that the hotel was closed, so she fell asleep on the street in the evening. The next morning she was picked up by the hotel receptionist, who helped escort her to her room. Lucy went to bed immediately and just slept until the next morning. She woke up early because one of the bellboy people brought the missing package, which she was very happy about. After receiving her luggage, she lay back to sleep. In the morning she took the metro to the Coliseum because the stop is here. She even looked at the Roman Forum, where she saw old ancient columns. She found many more interesting sights in the city. She was amazed because she hasn’t been in Rome before. In one of the museums, a man accompanied Lucy. Lucy liked him because he was really nice and observant. They found each other very quickly. She was happy and she forgot her last boyfriend.
The next day they left for the airport together. They could hardly wait to get home and announce the big news.

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