Nagy nyelvtani hibákat nem találtam benne. Itt átjavítottam (úgy, ahogy én írnám, nem feltétlen jelenti, hogy jobb, csak nekem jobban hangzik) néhány dolgot

Dear Sir or Madam,

With the advancements of technology today, development in communication has been on a massive scale. These developments are spreading around the world and also in my country, Hungary. As a result, Hungary is becoming increasingly similar to other developed countries.

For instance, one of the largest telecommunication companies in Hungary has recently set up a test 5G station. Moreover, 4G technology and iPhones are not just available, but common here. We also have satellite TV, allows people to watch lots of local and foreign channels.

Computers are also very common in hungarian households and workplaces. Because of contracts and almost all documents are edited on computers, everyday people have a PC at home, like in more developed countries. The computers at schools are used to play videos in connection with the lessons. However, students cannot use laptops to take notes like in Finland.

On the other hand, we have to be careful. Such fast development causes us to be reckless with the information and take it as fact. We should not believe everything online. [[ Also, the western culture shows it's disadvantages: when a new piece of tech releases, everyone wants to buy it (especially phones), even though the old one works just fine ]]

To sum it up, Hungary is becoming more and more digitally developed by the day, but it is still underdeveloped compared to the west.

Yours faithfully,


A szögletes zárójeles részt én nem raknám bele 2 okból: 30 szóval túllő a 200-on és szerintem nem igazán illik bele. Néhány helyen kicseréltem kifejezéseket. Ami még lényeges, hogy felbontottam egy bekezdést, és úgy rendeztem őket, hogy pozitív-pozitív-negatív. Ha meg tudod írni jól ilyen elrendezésbe, akkor maradhat, az tényleg csak személyes. Mást nem tudom, hogy átírtam-e, összevetheted a tieddel.