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Introduction
Travelling has always represented the most adequate way to relax and recharge ourselves with positive energy. The purpose of this proposal is to describe the needs of students and suggest further a convenient destination the school principal should bear in mind at school trips organization.
Current destinations
Up to a given point the school had always organized mountain climbing tours. However, if students are not particularly interested in mountain climbing may not be of interest to them. Having taken part in exhausting trips, the great part of students were not delighted, just fatigued. Nonetheless numerous teachers claimed that those kind of journeys was benefitial for studentry and in this way they had already learnt how esential is to be perseverence.
In addition in the last 2 years it has been organized trips to plage, but students thought that there was nothing special neither remarkable at those travels.
Needs of students
In the XXI. century students has become numb and grumpy. As a result they can not enjoy average trips and require unique journeys which can inspire them. I wish school principal would take action for this purpose!
Recommendations
It would be a good idea to set off for a journey on the islands of Galapagos. Without doubt when the students catch a glimpse of the protected, undestroyed natural environment will be astonished.
An another suggestion would be to take students scuba diving. In this way they would become privy to the hidden world of giant turtles, corales and aquatic life.
It might be possible to visit precious natural values and unique animal species by whom certainly students would feel charmed. Furthermore the unsurpassed sight has proved to be effective in bringing classmates together.
Finally I would recommend to remark these stunning desert-like volcanic islands set in the ocean and bear in mind that Galapagos is one of the most compelling places in the entire world.
Conclusion
In the light of the great impacts that the visit of Galapagos provides it would be meaningful to organize trips aimed this destination. If these recommendations were to be implemented certainly the studentry would be pleased and enjoy school trips. I wish students would have the opportunity to admire Galapagos!
(A proposal-t Galapagos szigetéről kellett írnom )
Travelling has always represented the most adequate way to relax and recharge ourselves with positive energy. The purpose of this proposal is to describe the needs of students and suggest further a convenient destination the school principal should bear in mind at school trips organization.
Current destinations
Up to a given point the school had always organized mountain climbing tours. However, if students are not particularly interested in mountain climbing may not be of interest to them. Having taken part in exhausting trips, the great part of students were not delighted, just fatigued. Nonetheless numerous teachers claimed that those kind of journeys was benefitial for studentry and in this way they had already learnt how esential is to be perseverence.
In addition in the last 2 years it has been organized trips to plage, but students thought that there was nothing special neither remarkable at those travels.
Needs of students
In the XXI. century students has become numb and grumpy. As a result they can not enjoy average trips and require unique journeys which can inspire them. I wish school principal would take action for this purpose!
Recommendations
It would be a good idea to set off for a journey on the islands of Galapagos. Without doubt when the students catch a glimpse of the protected, undestroyed natural environment will be astonished.
An another suggestion would be to take students scuba diving. In this way they would become privy to the hidden world of giant turtles, corales and aquatic life.
It might be possible to visit precious natural values and unique animal species by whom certainly students would feel charmed. Furthermore the unsurpassed sight has proved to be effective in bringing classmates together.
Finally I would recommend to remark these stunning desert-like volcanic islands set in the ocean and bear in mind that Galapagos is one of the most compelling places in the entire world.
Conclusion
In the light of the great impacts that the visit of Galapagos provides it would be meaningful to organize trips aimed this destination. If these recommendations were to be implemented certainly the studentry would be pleased and enjoy school trips. I wish students would have the opportunity to admire Galapagos!
(A proposal-t Galapagos szigetéről kellett írnom )
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Introduction
Travelling has always represented the most adequate way to relax and recharge ourselves with positive energy. The purpose of this proposal is to describe the needs of students, and furthermore, suggest a convenient destination the principal of the school may bear in mind for the organization of school trips.
Current destinations
Up to a certain point, the school had always organized hiking trips/excursions. However, if students are not particularly interested in hiking, it may not be of interest to them. Having taken part in exhausting trips, the most part/a great deal of students were not delighted but fatigued. Nonetheless, numerous teachers claimed that those kind of journeys were useful for students, and that way they had learnt how essential it is to be perseverant.
In addition, for the last 2 years trips to Prague(?) have been organized, but students thought that there was nothing either special or remarkable about them.
Students’ needs
By the 21st century, students have become somewhat indifferent and grumpy. As a result, they cannot enjoy average trips and require unique journeys which inspire them. I wish principals addressed this.
Suggestions
It would be a good idea to set off for a journey on the islands of Galápagos. Students would be astonished without doubt, if they caught a glimpse of the preserved, intact natural environment.
Another suggestion would be to take students scuba diving. This way they would get some insight to the hidden world of giant turtles, corals and underwater life.
It might be possible to see rare natural treasures and unique animal species which would certainly make students feel amazed. Furthermore, the unsurpassed sight has proven to be effective in bringing classmates together.
Finally, I would recommend keeping these stunning desert-like volcanic islands located in the ocean in mind and remember that Galápagos is one of the most fascinating places in the entire world.
Conclusion
Considering that visiting Galápagos has a great impact on one, it would be worthwhile to organize trips to this destination. If these recommendations were to be implemented, students would certainly be pleased and enjoying school trips. I wish students had the opportunity to pay a visit to Galápagos.
Travelling has always represented the most adequate way to relax and recharge ourselves with positive energy. The purpose of this proposal is to describe the needs of students, and furthermore, suggest a convenient destination the principal of the school may bear in mind for the organization of school trips.
Current destinations
Up to a certain point, the school had always organized hiking trips/excursions. However, if students are not particularly interested in hiking, it may not be of interest to them. Having taken part in exhausting trips, the most part/a great deal of students were not delighted but fatigued. Nonetheless, numerous teachers claimed that those kind of journeys were useful for students, and that way they had learnt how essential it is to be perseverant.
In addition, for the last 2 years trips to Prague(?) have been organized, but students thought that there was nothing either special or remarkable about them.
Students’ needs
By the 21st century, students have become somewhat indifferent and grumpy. As a result, they cannot enjoy average trips and require unique journeys which inspire them. I wish principals addressed this.
Suggestions
It would be a good idea to set off for a journey on the islands of Galápagos. Students would be astonished without doubt, if they caught a glimpse of the preserved, intact natural environment.
Another suggestion would be to take students scuba diving. This way they would get some insight to the hidden world of giant turtles, corals and underwater life.
It might be possible to see rare natural treasures and unique animal species which would certainly make students feel amazed. Furthermore, the unsurpassed sight has proven to be effective in bringing classmates together.
Finally, I would recommend keeping these stunning desert-like volcanic islands located in the ocean in mind and remember that Galápagos is one of the most fascinating places in the entire world.
Conclusion
Considering that visiting Galápagos has a great impact on one, it would be worthwhile to organize trips to this destination. If these recommendations were to be implemented, students would certainly be pleased and enjoying school trips. I wish students had the opportunity to pay a visit to Galápagos.
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