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Ha szívesen korrepetálnál, hozd létre magántanár profilodat itt.
Ha diák vagy és korrepetálásra van szükséged, akkor regisztrálj be és írd meg itt, hogy milyen tantárgyban!
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It is often said that gaming may become a compulsive behaviour accros a range of age groups. Nevertheless after meticulous studies, scientists claimed that particular games had developed worthwhile interpersonal skills as well as cognitive ones.
As a result, I had scarcely started playing developmental games, I became an enthusiastic player. Moreover, having found the game called "conquistador" I discovered how astonishing can be a well designed game.
To be honest, I feel that the grandiose success of the above mentioned game is acquired thanks to the game's simply scrumptious structure. If an individual chooses to play it, has to answer quiz questions that are based on general knowledge. At once, three players compete and who the more correct answers gives, the more acreage and points earns.
In my opinion anyone was to play the above-mentioned game, would be immersed in a feeling of energized focus, full involvement, and enjoyment in the process of the activity. In addition when vehement gamers discover this meaningful recreation, nothing else will matter, having no concept of the devoted time.
To conclude, it seems to me that the game called conquistador may have great impacts on players. Furthermore the invested time pays off, and as competitors the more play the more educated will become. I wish more teenagers would play this kind of games rather than mindless ones.
It is often said that gaming may become a compulsive behaviour accros a range of age groups. Nevertheless after meticulous studies, scientists claimed that particular games had developed worthwhile interpersonal skills as well as cognitive ones.
As a result, I had scarcely started playing developmental games, I became an enthusiastic player. Moreover, having found the game called "conquistador" I discovered how astonishing can be a well designed game.
To be honest, I feel that the grandiose success of the above mentioned game is acquired thanks to the game's simply scrumptious structure. If an individual chooses to play it, has to answer quiz questions that are based on general knowledge. At once, three players compete and who the more correct answers gives, the more acreage and points earns.
In my opinion anyone was to play the above-mentioned game, would be immersed in a feeling of energized focus, full involvement, and enjoyment in the process of the activity. In addition when vehement gamers discover this meaningful recreation, nothing else will matter, having no concept of the devoted time.
To conclude, it seems to me that the game called conquistador may have great impacts on players. Furthermore the invested time pays off, and as competitors the more play the more educated will become. I wish more teenagers would play this kind of games rather than mindless ones.
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Szia! Kérlek, ha kérdésed van valamivel kapcsolatban, vagy szeretnéd, hogy részletesen elmagyarázzam a javításaimat, keress bátran üzenetben! 
It is often said that gaming may make people of certain age groups become addicted to it. Nevertheless, after conducting thorough studies, scientists claim that particular games develop useful interpersonal skills as well as cognitive ones.
Similarly, I had barely started playing developmental games and I became an enthusiastic player. Moreover, by finding the game called "Conquistador", I discovered how astonishing a well designed game can be.
To be honest, I feel that the grandiose success of the above mentioned game is due to the utterly excellent structure of the game. If an individual chooses to play it, he/she has to answer quiz questions that are based on general knowledge. Three players can compete at the same time, and those who give correct answers can earn territory [ha területre gondoltál] and points.
In my opinion, if someone was to play the above mentioned game, he/she would be immersed in a feeling of energized focus, full involvement, and enjoyment in the process of the activity. In addition, when persistent (kitartó?) gamers discover this meaningful recreation, nothing else will matter and they might lose track of time (while playing).
To conclude, it seems to me that this game called Conquistador may have a great impact on players. Furthermore, the invested time pays off, and the more competitors play, the more educated they will become. I wish more teenagers played these kind of games rather than mindless ones.
It is often said that gaming may make people of certain age groups become addicted to it. Nevertheless, after conducting thorough studies, scientists claim that particular games develop useful interpersonal skills as well as cognitive ones.
Similarly, I had barely started playing developmental games and I became an enthusiastic player. Moreover, by finding the game called "Conquistador", I discovered how astonishing a well designed game can be.
To be honest, I feel that the grandiose success of the above mentioned game is due to the utterly excellent structure of the game. If an individual chooses to play it, he/she has to answer quiz questions that are based on general knowledge. Three players can compete at the same time, and those who give correct answers can earn territory [ha területre gondoltál] and points.
In my opinion, if someone was to play the above mentioned game, he/she would be immersed in a feeling of energized focus, full involvement, and enjoyment in the process of the activity. In addition, when persistent (kitartó?) gamers discover this meaningful recreation, nothing else will matter and they might lose track of time (while playing).
To conclude, it seems to me that this game called Conquistador may have a great impact on players. Furthermore, the invested time pays off, and the more competitors play, the more educated they will become. I wish more teenagers played these kind of games rather than mindless ones.
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