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Angol-fogalmazás-kijavítás

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I have always been keen on adventurous  sports. Many people feel that passing across a deep gorge is frightful. Nonetheless I was determined to try it.
  In the 5th grade I set off to a trip with my class to Szováta. Our classmaster surprised us, and without our previous assumption, took us to a brilliant adventure park. Having helmets put on, we started to tackle with the obstacle course which required a range of skills, like strength, courage and persistence. Moreover, we had to cross over obstacles in 6 meter height from the ground. As a result, we had hardly accomplished a part of the course, when the adrenaline level in our organisms extremelly increased. The icing at the cake was the last obstacle, a cableway above a sparkling lake. However, only a few of us did take upon oneself to race through the lake. In my opinion, feeling the wind, admiring the and being privy to the sense of flight is amazing! All of the participants said that they became obsessed with cableracing. To be honest,I feel that everyone who has already discovered the joy of this action, wants to relive the generated impressions again.
 If I hadn't been enough brave I would have missed a wonderful experience.
To sum up, I would say that it is worth to race through the air and everyone should try it! I wish I had the possibility to visit more astonishing adventure parks!
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I have always been keen on adventurous sports. Many people feel that passing across a deep gorge is frightening. Nonetheless I was determined to try it.
In 5th grade I went on a trip with my class to Szováta. We had no clue what a brilliant adventure park our head teacher was going to take us to. Having helmets put on, we started to tackle the obstacle course which needed a range of skills, like strength, courage, and persistence. Moreover, we had to cross over obstacles 6 meters up in the air. It was such an adrenaline rush. The icing on the cake was the last obstacle, a cableway above a glittering lake. However, only a few of us had the courage to race through the lake. Feeling the wind in your hair is amazing! All the people who took part said that they became obsessed with cable racing. To be honest, I feel that everyone who has already discovered the joy of this thing wants to have another go soon.
If I hadn't been brave enough I would have missed a wonderful experience.
To sum up I would say that it is worth to race through the air and everyone should try it! I wish I had the possibility to visit more astonishing adventure parks!
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