Hát nem vagyok jó angolból, de tudsz arról írni, hogy például:
- te már ekkor tudtad, hogy ez akarsz lenni.....
-ezért szeretnél ez lenni...
-ez tetszik neked benne...
-ennyit kell még tennem érte, hogy az legyél...
-ő a példaképed...

(pár ötlet)

Dear Sir/Madam,
When I grow up I want to be a doctor, because I want to help other people to get healed. I decided it when I was only 10years old(nem tudom hány éves vagy). I want to be a doctor who is always nice and kind. Also, doctors get a lot of money, which could help me a lot. I like to take care of people, because I'm really friendly girl. People who are going to visit me, would be very gratefull to me. But if I can’t be a doctor, then I want to be a hairstylist. I think it is fun being a hairstylist because you can make your own hair. I don’t know really what I want to be, but I believe that dreams can come true.

When I grow up, I would like to be a doctor. To make this dream become true, I have to study really hard, and face those obstacles, that life gives me.
I really want to help people. In my opinion, doctors are smart, and hardworking, and I want to become one of them. Of course, this carrier also has a price.. If I will get into a medical shool, I will loose a lot a of free time, because of the amount of things that I have to study. But I assume that, it’s worth it.
My family and I, would be really proud of me. I am already doing my best, and I’m trying really hard to make this whole thing happen.

U.i.
Tudom hogy nincs meg a 12 mondat, viszont ki lehet egészíteni, átírni