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A téma az volt hogy mi a legnagyobb előnye a más országokba való utazásnak. (education-t és experience-t választottam.
Travelling is the most adequate way to relax and fill with positive energy. It impacts on our state of mind in a positive way. Many people feel that visiting other countries although it's high price, it is well worth to go. But what are the greatest benefits?
Firstly, were we to travel to a cultural heritage, we would aquire wealth of knowledge about the selected destination. Even only about a few tourist attractions had we heard from a guide it is worth. Scarcely had a tourist looked at the old quarter of the town, understood a lot about the city's history. Travel agencies said that by every museum visit and city sightseeing our erudition would increase.
Another advantage of travelling is to gain experience. There are the people who travel escaping from their daily exhausting routine by living new experience. If someone was without motivation, for sure would enjoy travelling to places that have nothing in common where they live. Were we to visit an astonishing country we could forget all of our problems and the heaviness of our grey daily routine. Nummerous people enjoy doing extrem activities or discovering new places. By visiting unique places, tasting various gastronomy specialities, getting to know other people's mentality and lifestyle, we can gather essential life experience.
To sum up, travelling to other countries has a great amount of advantages. Tourists are given the opportunity to learn about different cultures and gather experience, admiring the representative architecture and getting privy to residents' lifestyle. In my opinion travelling is amazing, and should more people go on holidays to foreign land their life will be balanced and their heart will swell with happines. I wish I visited some more countries!
Travelling is the most adequate way to relax and fill with positive energy. It impacts on our state of mind in a positive way. Many people feel that visiting other countries although it's high price, it is well worth to go. But what are the greatest benefits?
Firstly, were we to travel to a cultural heritage, we would aquire wealth of knowledge about the selected destination. Even only about a few tourist attractions had we heard from a guide it is worth. Scarcely had a tourist looked at the old quarter of the town, understood a lot about the city's history. Travel agencies said that by every museum visit and city sightseeing our erudition would increase.
Another advantage of travelling is to gain experience. There are the people who travel escaping from their daily exhausting routine by living new experience. If someone was without motivation, for sure would enjoy travelling to places that have nothing in common where they live. Were we to visit an astonishing country we could forget all of our problems and the heaviness of our grey daily routine. Nummerous people enjoy doing extrem activities or discovering new places. By visiting unique places, tasting various gastronomy specialities, getting to know other people's mentality and lifestyle, we can gather essential life experience.
To sum up, travelling to other countries has a great amount of advantages. Tourists are given the opportunity to learn about different cultures and gather experience, admiring the representative architecture and getting privy to residents' lifestyle. In my opinion travelling is amazing, and should more people go on holidays to foreign land their life will be balanced and their heart will swell with happines. I wish I visited some more countries!
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Szia! Néhány kifejezésen pontosítottam leginkább, hogy "angolosabbnak" hangozzon és minden helyesen legyen megfogalmazva. Remélem, segít! 
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Travelling is the most adequate way to relax and recharge ourselves with positive energy. It impacts our state of mind in a positive way. Many people feel that even though visiting other countries is costly, it is still worth going. But what are the greatest benefits?
Firstly, if were we to travel to a place of cultural heritage, we would acquire invaluable knowledge about the selected destination. It is still worth even if it is just a few tourist attractions we hear about from the tour guide. Hardly did a tourist learn about the history of the old quarter of a town just by looking at it. According to travel agencies, our erudition increases by every museum visit and city sightseeing.
Another advantage of travelling is gaining experience. There are people who travel to escape their exhausting daily routine by going on an adventure. If someone lacked motivation, they would enjoy travelling to places that have nothing in common with their casual surroundings. Were we to visit an astonishing country, we could forget about all of our problems and the weight of our dreary daily routine. Numerous people enjoy doing extreme activities or discovering new places. By visiting unique places, tasting various culinary specialties, getting to know other people's mentality and lifestyle we can gather essential life experience.
To sum up, travelling to foreign countries has a great amount of advantages. Tourists are given the opportunity to learn about different cultures and gather experience, to admire the characteristic architecture and to get some insight to the lifestyle of locals. In my opinion, travelling is amazing, and more people should go on holidays to remote places, so that their life would be balanced, and their heart filled with happiness. I wish I could visit some more countries!
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Travelling is the most adequate way to relax and recharge ourselves with positive energy. It impacts our state of mind in a positive way. Many people feel that even though visiting other countries is costly, it is still worth going. But what are the greatest benefits?
Firstly, if were we to travel to a place of cultural heritage, we would acquire invaluable knowledge about the selected destination. It is still worth even if it is just a few tourist attractions we hear about from the tour guide. Hardly did a tourist learn about the history of the old quarter of a town just by looking at it. According to travel agencies, our erudition increases by every museum visit and city sightseeing.
Another advantage of travelling is gaining experience. There are people who travel to escape their exhausting daily routine by going on an adventure. If someone lacked motivation, they would enjoy travelling to places that have nothing in common with their casual surroundings. Were we to visit an astonishing country, we could forget about all of our problems and the weight of our dreary daily routine. Numerous people enjoy doing extreme activities or discovering new places. By visiting unique places, tasting various culinary specialties, getting to know other people's mentality and lifestyle we can gather essential life experience.
To sum up, travelling to foreign countries has a great amount of advantages. Tourists are given the opportunity to learn about different cultures and gather experience, to admire the characteristic architecture and to get some insight to the lifestyle of locals. In my opinion, travelling is amazing, and more people should go on holidays to remote places, so that their life would be balanced, and their heart filled with happiness. I wish I could visit some more countries!
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